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Journal Entry 6

Journal Entry 6

Q What areas you will focus on as you revise and why? What further research will you do? What types of sources are you hoping to find? What did you learn from your peer review and instructor feedback? How you will use that feedback to guide your revision? What is your timeline? When and where will you revise? What goals do you have for your final draft? Why these goals?

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I will focus on the content and will read each sentence to check whether this needs any revised statement or not. The sentence-level organization needs total coherence and for that I will read line by lines. The further research that I will add is on how to find the relevant sources on the research paper. The main point of this paper is to make the research process a little bit relaxing rather than stereotyping the same thing over and over again. I have added those sources which has only claimed that research paper needs lots of work to be invested. But the entire process needs to be questioned as well so that the best part of the research process gets explored.